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Ranger448 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Photographer
Out of His Shirt, Shirt Throw 1 2 and 3, Shadow Sky and Sun, Reflecting and Reflecting 2. Those are ones I like the best of the new lot. You made beautiful use of natural light. Shadow Sky and Sun a brilliant study in contrasts. Your model is lovely, I like redheads, male or female. Props to her for her poise and grace. Oh, and I hit myself in the back of the head on my comments about flash use in my last critique. Upon looking closer, I saw that the light came from inside the room in the In His Shirt photos. If those mine to take, I would have taped paper towels over the lights to filter and soften the shine.
Ranger448 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Photographer
You do quite well with black and white. You seem to have a knack with bringing out natural lighting when B+W is used. "In His Shirt 2" is a great photo, awesome use of shadow and contrast. One problem: the flash is reflected. As much as I actively disliked my photography teacher, she taught me when use of the flash was detrimental to a photo. Using natural light is good too, just watch out for the intensity of light focused in one place. The eye is drawn to look at the source of light and move from there. I won't pretend to be an expert, I'm telling you what I see. I hope the critique is useful.
Mission-46 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
My wife, Kate showed me some of your (love photography, too) pics and really liked them. It also brought me to the deviantart sight, that I have never heard of, cool all around. Kate has been reading your online comic for years. Thank you for showing your art!!!! Tc
ladywolfsong Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
hey Mookie. I read Dominic Deegan. I've been a fan since around 2008 I think. I arrived late to the party, but went back to the beginning and read straight through of course. Great photos! Now I'm a fan here as well.
sheherazahde Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
hi Mookie,

I'm a fan of Dominic Deegan. I just followed your link from there.

I wasn't expecting erotic photography. But I'm a volunteer at the Rochester Erotic Arts Festival and I think you should submit some of your photographs to their art show.

Schurchk Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I wasn't aware that you were on deviantArt, not until I started re-reading the arcs. Again. Again again. >.> Erm. Moving on. I'm a recent fan of Dominic Deegan - Oracle for Hire, and I'm more than willing to say that your writing is wonderful. There are many adjectives for it, but I think wonderful does the job just fine. I'm glad that the internet, and by connection the world, has people like you. There are those that hold your work in contempt, but my opinion is that they are but a small, but vocal minority.

Best of luck to you, Mookie, may the winds be at your backs, and let your mind wander freely. It will always come back.
KnoxGargol Featured By Owner May 17, 2011
Hi Mookie. I never knew you were on dA(or didn't remember). I've been your loyal reader even since autumn 2006(maybe too loyal... been reading the story arc through maybe 4 or 5 times). Now that I started on dA actively(account's been here for 8 months or so, but went to army so that's it for being active...) I thought I'd love to add ya to my watch list.

Congratulations, you have just acquired a new stalker. ;P
Nichelle-Shell-M Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
took me three weekends, yesterday and today to finally looke through your photography. EPIC. also....HADOKEN! you know what i mean :3
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